Hey all, well here is the oneshot that I've edited for Imari of the Little White Butterflies, so many thanks to him. It's about a girl who loves being clean and how she takes a bad path to go to school and encounters dirty hobos.. and well they do some nasty things to her. This is my warning to you all, this is EXTREME! Like for real, the rape stuff I've been posting got nothing on this, theres a little violence and piss in this as well so be careful. Anyways I'm gonna go do some reading so I'll post up satomi in about 3 hours, hahaha I'm killing you all aren't I, lol well lemme finish some readings first, the readings are more important at the moment. Hmm oh yeah also I don't mind if you voice your opinion on this, I would imagine a huge amount of people will dislike it but yeah just leave a comment. Lol well for now
Enjoy!
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it wasn't bad I guess. Would have liked it better if she started liking it or something at the end :D
I can definitely understand the warning about this. It was a good read, though it kinda makes you feel sorry for the girl at the end.
I didn't read it. Can I still give an opinion? ;-)
be my guest, please. LOL
@Setebos
Hahaha, how can you give in an opinion when you haven't read it? lol check it out and who knows, you might like it :p
Why don't you give an opinion before reading it and then read it and give a new opinion.
Who can anyone read this garbage, gangrape by hobos.
Nice work.
Felt a bit negative, but hey, its H.
Its something that would leave a mark in the brain so its ok, as it is better than generics.
Ok, so I went ahead and read it, just so I could give an honest opinion of it.
Although I know there are people out there who like this sort of thing, I myself do not. I am not against a story having dark undertones, or for there to be some hard rape in a story, but there has to be something at the end to make the story end well.
I'm not saying it has to end with all sunshine and rainbows, but something where the victim gets to see the rapists brought to justice, or an ending where someone loves them and takes them in despite them being "dirtied".
This did not have that sort of ending. The only "good" part of the ending was that she didn't die. If this were to end they way *I* would want it to, she would eventually be able to tell the police what happened, and all the hobos would be arrested. Then some boy who always loved her but who had been scared away by her "clean freak" attitude would confess to her and help her to get over her trauma.
I could be a dick and make comments like "what sort of person could enjoy this", but I know that some of the stuff *I* like makes others scream and run. So if you do like it, fine. To each their own.
Fayt, it is your site so you are free to post whatever you like. There is enough stuff you post that I *do* enjoy that I am not going to freak out about this one story. But the next time you give a warning about something, I will definitely not read it.
tl;dr: I didn't like it, but don't let that stop you.
Rape is not something I read and rape that has "EXTREME" warning from Fayt is not something I want to even consider reading, so thanks for warning.
This story is actually fairly tame by Kawady MAX's standards. Most of his stuff involves girls being kidnapped or blackmailed or otherwise forced into a veritable lifetime of neverending rape. This girl gets off comparatively easy.
I fully realize why many people would have a hard time stomaching this kind of story, but in my opinion the usual "girl gets raped and ends up enjoying it" stories are, in their own way, far more repulsive. Those don't quite condone rape, but they act like it's just an aggressive courtship tactic, a way to get a girl to love you, and something that all women secretly long for. It's just that sort of thinking that leads to so many real-life rapes, the idea that "she was asking for it" or "when she said no she was just playing hard to get".
Now, I'm not trying to pull an Equality Now and claim that those stories influence people to go out and commit rape or anything. I'm just saying that stories like this one are much more honest about their subject matter. They may be brutal, but they're also clear that rape is a terrible, awful thing that no person should ever do to another.
All i have to say is: wow!
The warning was well deserved, this was pretty damned sick stuff. From now on when you put other warnings i won't even touch those.
NICE
I'm d/ling atm but from what I read here i'm wondering if i should read it~
Well seriously, I don't read things like this. It only makes me feel bad and I want to feel happy after I read hentai or at least excited and these stories do neither for me. I know everything that's drawn has a fanbase and I'm not here to judge, because I can't stand close scrutiny myself.
I've seen too much in a lfetime to want to read about it for entertainment, but to each...
Much appreciated. Thank you!!
Well, it could be worse. She could be in a radical Islam nation which would have her executed for being raped....
I liked it ; I wish it had been more than a one shot though, it's a bit on the easy side to leave us hanging in the end as she loses her mind. I mean, surely you can imagine the possibilities of what could come next.
On another note, I don't quite understand why some people act all shocked with rape content ; in a renai eroge I can understand, since it can spoil the mood, but in H-mange ? I figure it's the same as yaoi or shota being such a nooooo-no for me, so thanks for the warnings :) I do feel "normal" and "generic" H mangas quite boring though...
Hey, thanks for the translation!
I found four pages from another very similar work that I think is by Kawady Max as well. Like “defiled virgin”, the plot seems to revolve around a girl being raped by a trio of hobos in the park.
Look at posts 29 to 32 here..
http://orz.gurochan.net/req/archive/1138654988
I want the rest of the story, does anyone know the title and where I can find it?
@Sky: Drawing style is definitely by Yanagawa Rio (やながわ理央), title is on post 32, Danbōru shoujo (段ボール少女 = Cardboard girl).
With the author's name and story title it was quite easy to find in Google, it was published in Masyo 2003-09 (second entry at hxxp://www.sanwapub.com/taciyomi/masho/0309/ ).
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