Here you go people, another long day for me. Anyways this is an interesting oneshot and the reason I say interesting is because its not everyday you see a story about 2 people who get stranded on an island and it just so happens that the dude is the enemy of the mother's son. The thing I'm a little confused about is the dude's age, he seems a little old looking to be a kid. Maybe he's a teen, but to pick on a kid that looks way younger then him is pretty sad lol. Well they end up falling for each other, I really don't consider this ntr, I mean she does say some hurtful things and the kid hears it, but that's about it. Hmm if it is let me know and I'll put that tag in. This was brought to you by Psyburn21 and Brolen, so many thanks to them. As for news, just look at the post below for it but before that
Enjoy!
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HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!
Turning out the dude was the son's bully just gave this story an interesting twist.
BTW, I still think it is NTR.
-ryu77
Thanks Psyburn21, Brolen and Fayt.
Damn, this and Musa getting edited...I don't know what to say... *tears of joy*. Now only if Sayuki ch.18 pops up, my week would be complete.
rage and it still ntr indeed >:(
this one..... i have to say the whole thing..... Never thought i would say this about a sanbun but i found this story to be completely unbelievable and frankly kind of stupid
mabye, makes me not feel as sorry for the boy though, unlike other sanbuns that really tug at your heart,this one made me say: fictional.
The second chapter of Musa is here
http://www.sendspace.com/file/5e4yd0
can somebody download it and then upload it to rapidshare? PLEASE.
125.jpg, should it be "and we couldn't find anyone..."instead of "and we couldn't fine anyone..."?
Oh man, another one slipped by me, my bad.
I'm sorry anonymous, but Sanbuns storys are completely unrealistic, well maybe 1 or 2 storys are reallistic but for the most part they are pretty unbeliavable, even this one, just because she as sex with the bully she completely forgets the husband and the son? if thats not unreallistic i dont know what is, maybe if she didnt love them right from the beginning it would be more beliavable, but doing a 180 like that is idiotic, even the other ntrs by sanbun are like that, sex isnt the same thing as love, but by sanbuns standards and other ntr artists it is
being the petty bastard that I am I would have had them turn the ship around, they want to be together that much fine, be together when the next tropical storm hits cause I wouldn't rescue her ass...
failing that I'd have her tossed in jail or become a social outcast, good luck to her living with all those living with all those guys cause she sure as hell doesn't have a home to return to...
p.s. this isn't ntr, the husband wasn't there to have his wife stolen from him, this is cheating with completely unnecessary bad-mouthing of your family at the end. the guy never once brought up her son or husband so where the hell'd that shit come from?
Awesome,thanks again for doing that for me.
@ redbone
I agree with you completely. If she wants that dudes son so bad fine. Lets just she how well she can raise him in a deserted island. Everyone we are making a u-turn!
And yes it is extremely unbelievable even by NTR standards.
Is it just me or do the women in ntr loose like 50% of their IQ by the end of the storys?
Seriously its like if they get f.....d by someone other than their husbands, boyfriends, etc, they get more and more stupid.
dont get me wrong, i love ntr and some storys are pretty good, but seriously...
Oh come on!
The moment Mom and dad manage to find the island where they're in and turn the radio, the mother just *happens* to tell in mid-sex how much of a fucking failure her son his for getting bullied at school?
That was too forced and stupid for me to rage. Plus it was rushed as hell, can't help it when it's a oneshot.
Still hot though, thanks for the release.
Edit: The moment Dad and son*
this might have worked in long form, they got rescued and continued sneaking around behind the son and husband's backs but as a one-shot its almost like Sanbun doesn't think much of his audience(I already think he has a low opinion of women cause like an anon said, once anybody but their lover/husband has sex with the women in his stories they suddenly forget how much they "loved" their family) cause if he thinks we'll buy this half-assed story he doesn't think much of us.
to be fair maybe this was a failure he didn't want printed or he thought he'd have more then one chap to tell the story, his work is already starting to stray into the formulamatic(imo) so he didn't need this black eye on his rep.
Almost all Sanbun stories, is about how a woman is lost in lust and this is no exception, and although unrealistic story, I liked.
This is heavy forced NTR i mean the radio bit at the end was such "my god" cheesy moment and her sudden tur to sex right after they find tghe working radio was laughable... not one of his best GOOD ends but it belongs in the library
If it was going to be a oneshot, it should've been longer. IMO, a much better ending, would've been the son and husband arriving on the island. The son is happy to finally re-unite with his mother that he rushes to find her. When he does, he sees his mother and the bully having sex, with her expressing her feelings towards her son and the guy looking at him, smiling. The mother is also looking at her son, but doesn't give a damn. There should've been a version B, in which the mother and son are trapped, and the mother discovers that her son is bigger than her husband.
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